Friday, September 24, 2010

The Beach in August

The day the fat woman
In the bright blue bathing suit
Walked into the water and died,
I thought about the human
Condition. Pieces of old fruit
Came in and were left by the tide

What I thought about the human
Condition was this: old fruit
Comes in and is left, and dries
In the sun. Another fat woman
In a dull green bathing suit
Dives into the water and dies.
The pulmotors glisten. It is noon

We dry and die in the sun
While the seascape arranges old fruit,
Coming in and the tide, glistening
At noon. A woman, moderately stout,
In a nondescript bathing suit,
Swims to a pier. A tall woman
Steps toward the sea. One thinks about the human
Condition. The tide does in and goes out.



My old baby sitter's family had just bought a beach house in Scituate
We drove an hour to get there, blasting beach music the whole time
And I played a song I thought you’d like to see if you’d ask who it was by
Miraculously, we found our way to the shore with the help of a couple maps
I parked the car in front of their house and they pointed us towards the beach
The whole day was spent lounging in the sand
Away from the crowds, away from the city
Away from anything
As the sun set, we sat on the rocks watching the waves collide with rocks below us
The splashes grazing our bare feet
And I realized that all I wanted in life
Was to be a beach bum with you

4 comments:

  1. summery feel. brings happy feelings to my body

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  2. really brings back memories. great adjustment, i feel like I understood your version better, and it gave me more of an image

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  3. summery, brings back great memories, brings me to a warmer place. About Elianaaa PERHAPS? Love it, swell job.

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